Kia orana Ms Rolton,

I want to comment on your beautiful post, poems are so lovely your one is really amazing.  I think your one is really amazing, the sentence that says “ Fielders sprinting for the catch “ I had that, when I went to catch the ball I tripped and I fell. My cousin laughed  and I said “ I will tell “ he said fine I won’t laugh. That was a lovely poem, I am interested in your poems.

Kind regards

Navarone

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