Kia orana Ms Rolton,
I want to comment on your beautiful post, poems are so lovely your one is really amazing. I think your one is really amazing, the sentence that says “ Fielders sprinting for the catch “ I had that, when I went to catch the ball I tripped and I fell. My cousin laughed and I said “ I will tell “ he said fine I won’t laugh. That was a lovely poem, I am interested in your poems.